2 TYPES OF PARAGRAPH (TOPIC, SUPPORTING AND CONCLUDING SENTENCES) 
PARAGRAPH 1.
    Charity for the poor
works to the interest of society. Charity helps poor people eat
better, have a shelter and medicine so that they live better lives. Without
charity the poor may not find basic resources to get by in life. As a
consequence of being left alone with their misfortune--hungry, ill and
homeless--poor people may contract diseases, die early, and engage in crimes.
Most likely, they become bad role models for their children, too. These
end-results harm a society.
Topic sentence.
Charity for the poor works to the interest of society. 
Supporting sentence.
Charity
 helps poor people eat better, have a shelter and medicine so that they 
live better lives. Without charity the poor may not find basic resources
 to get by in life. As a consequence of being left alone with their 
misfortune--hungry, ill and homeless--poor people may contract diseases,
 die early, and engage in crimes. Most likely, they become bad role 
models for their children, too. 
Concluding sentence.
These end-results harm a society.
PARAGRAPH 2.
 
   My brother has some disgusting and inconsiderate habits. He loves to 
chew on toothpicks. That would not be so bad if he didn’t leave them 
lying all over the house. Sometimes they even get stuck in the carpet. 
Another bad habit he has is walking through the house with his muddy 
boots. He will walk right across a freshly washed floor. He will take 
his boots off and leave them in the middle of the floor for everyone to 
trip over. He leaves hair all over the shower and the soap. He doesn’t 
bother to rinse the shower out or to rinse the soap off. This is 
inconsiderate because everyone else has to use the shower too. If my 
brother lived alone, he could be the slob that he is without anyone else
 caring, but since he lives with other people, it would help if he 
showed a little more consideration for his family!
Topic sentence. 
My brother has some disgusting and inconsiderate habits. He loves to 
chew on toothpicks
Supporting sentence.
That
 would not be so bad if he didn’t leave them lying all over the house. 
Sometimes they even get stuck in the carpet. Another bad habit he has is
 walking through the house with his muddy boots. He will walk right 
across a freshly washed floor. He will take his boots off and leave them
 in the middle of the floor for everyone to trip over. He leaves hair 
all over the shower and the soap. He doesn’t bother to rinse the shower 
out or to rinse the soap off. This is inconsiderate because everyone 
else has to use the shower too. 
Concluding sentence. 
If
 my brother lived alone, he could be the slob that he is without anyone 
else caring, but since he lives with other people, it would help if he 
showed a little more consideration for his family! 
     Water pollution is any chemical, physical, or biological 
change in the quality of water that has a harmful effects on any living 
thing that drinks or uses or lives in it. When humans drink polluted 
water it often has serious effects on their health. Water pollution is 
usually caused by human activities. Different human sources add to the 
pollution of water. There are two sorts of sources, point and nonpoint 
sources. Point sources discharge pollutants at specific locations 
through pipelines or sewers into the surface water. Nonpoint sources are
 sources that cannot be traced to a single site of discharge. Examples 
of point sources are factories, sewage treatment plants, underground 
mines, oil wells, oil tankers and agriculture while examples of nonpoint
 sources are acid deposition from the air, traffic, pollutants that are 
spread through rivers and pollutants that enter the water through 
groundwater. Nonpoint pollution is hard to control because the 
perpetrators cannot be traced. 
There are several classes of water pollutants. The first are disease causing agents. These are bacteria, viruses, protozoa and parasitic worms that enter sewage systems and untreated waste. A second category of water pollutants is water soluble inorganic pollutants, such as acids, salts and toxic metals. Large quantities of these compounds will make water unfit to drink and will cause the death of aquatic life. A third class of water pollutants is oxygen demanding wastes, wastes that can be decomposed by oxygen requiring bacteria. When large populations of decomposing bacteria are converting these wastes it can deplete oxygen levels in the water. This causes other organisms in the water, such as fish, to die. Another class of water pollutants are nutrients. They are water soluble nitrates and phosphates that cause excessive growth of algae and other water plants, which deplete the water's oxygen supply. This kills fish and when found in drinking water, can kill young children.
There are several classes of water pollutants. The first are disease causing agents. These are bacteria, viruses, protozoa and parasitic worms that enter sewage systems and untreated waste. A second category of water pollutants is water soluble inorganic pollutants, such as acids, salts and toxic metals. Large quantities of these compounds will make water unfit to drink and will cause the death of aquatic life. A third class of water pollutants is oxygen demanding wastes, wastes that can be decomposed by oxygen requiring bacteria. When large populations of decomposing bacteria are converting these wastes it can deplete oxygen levels in the water. This causes other organisms in the water, such as fish, to die. Another class of water pollutants are nutrients. They are water soluble nitrates and phosphates that cause excessive growth of algae and other water plants, which deplete the water's oxygen supply. This kills fish and when found in drinking water, can kill young children.
     Water can also be polluted by a number of organic compounds such as 
oil, plastics and pesticides, which are harmful to humans and all plants
 and animals in the water. A very dangerous category is suspended 
sediment, because it causes depletion in the water's light absorption 
and the particles spread dangerous compounds can cause cancer, birth 
defects and genetic damage and are thus very dangerous water pollutants.
      In conclusion, I think that water pollution is, without a doubt, a huge 
problem in today’s society. If we do not take action now this could lead
 to bad news for everyone in many ways. Our drinking water will be 
affected and our aquatic organism will be affected, which will 
eventually be a risk for humans in many ways. I think that more people 
should be concerned with this topic and how they greatly affect our 
everyday lives. People should stop taking what they have for granted and
 try to help stop this enormous problem before it is too late. 
Topic sentence.
 Water pollution is any chemical, physical, or biological
 change in the quality of water that has a harmful effects on any living
 thing that drinks or uses or lives in it.
Supporting sentence.
When humans drink polluted water it often has serious 
effects on their health. Water pollution is usually caused by human 
activities. Different human sources add to the pollution of water. There
 are two sorts of sources, point and nonpoint sources. Point sources 
discharge pollutants at specific locations through pipelines or sewers 
into the surface water. Nonpoint sources are sources that cannot be 
traced to a single site of discharge. Examples of point sources are 
factories, sewage treatment plants, underground mines, oil wells, oil 
tankers and agriculture while examples of nonpoint sources are acid 
deposition from the air, traffic, pollutants that are spread through 
rivers and pollutants that enter the water through groundwater. Nonpoint
 pollution is hard to control because the perpetrators cannot be traced.
There are several classes of water pollutants. The first are disease 
causing agents. These are bacteria, viruses, protozoa and parasitic 
worms that enter sewage systems and untreated waste. A second category 
of water pollutants is water soluble inorganic pollutants, such as 
acids, salts and toxic metals. Large quantities of these compounds will 
make water unfit to drink and will cause the death of aquatic life. A 
third class of water pollutants is oxygen demanding wastes, wastes that 
can be decomposed by oxygen requiring bacteria. When large populations 
of decomposing bacteria are converting these wastes it can deplete 
oxygen levels in the water. This causes other organisms in the water, 
such as fish, to die. Another class of water pollutants are nutrients. 
They are water soluble nitrates and phosphates that cause excessive 
growth of algae and other water plants, which deplete the water's oxygen
 supply. This kills fish and when found in drinking water, can kill 
young children.
Water can also be polluted by a number of organic compounds such as oil,
 plastics and pesticides, which are harmful to humans and all plants and
 animals in the water. A very dangerous category is suspended sediment, 
because it causes depletion in the water's light absorption and the 
particles spread dangerous compounds can cause cancer, birth defects and
 genetic damage and are thus very dangerous water pollutants. 
Concluding sentence.
In conclusion, I think that water pollution is, without a doubt, a huge 
problem in today’s society. If we do not take action now this could lead
 to bad news for everyone in many ways. Our drinking water will be 
affected and our aquatic organism will be affected, which will 
eventually be a risk for humans in many ways. I think that more people 
should be concerned with this topic and how they greatly affect our 
everyday lives. People should stop taking what they have for granted and
 try to help stop this enormous problem before it is too late.
 
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